2010年2月4日 星期四

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Children today spend more time watching TV than they did in the past. Describe some of the advantages and disadvantages of watching TV.

These days, children spend more time to watch TV than they did in the past. There are some advantages and disadvantages of watching TV. Now, I would like to argue that there are more disadvantages of watching TV than advantages.
To begin with, children like watching TV as the program are very interesting. When they go home, they turn on the TV. They want to relax after school. Also, children ate something while they were watching TV. More time with television was linked to rises in childhood obesity. They are growing less healthy due to lack of exercise. Therefore, children are more likely to be overweight and less healthy, so more prone to diseases such as diabetes and heart disease, etc.
Moreover, some people argue that watching TV can change their brain development. However, youngsters who spend more time watching TV so they used less time in learning. They get a bad result of the tests. So, children should not spend more time in watching TV, they should focus on the learning.
In addition, students can receive information around the world but some program themselves are often quite violent. And then children have harmful behavior. The language of program is also rude. This will affect the child’s values.
In conclusion, children today spend more time watching TV, in fact, there are more disadvantages.

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